Van Til Editing Services

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Editing Samples - Before:


From Christian Fantasy novella:


    "I shook my head to clear these thoughts when I heard my name being called from down the hallway.  I looked up to see Marvin standing in the doorway to the main hall, waving for me to come in.  The agonizing sound of pain filled my ears as I walked closer to the room.  As I stepped in, I saw a warrior laying out on the examining table with arrows sticking out of his torso; blood seeping out of his black clothes and onto the floor.


     Taking a deep breath, I toned out the sound of the warrior crying and the sight of blood as I placed my hands around the base of one of the arrows."




Clip From an Online Article:


"Top Reasons to Become an SEO Freelance Writer


The online space is abuzz with all manner of clips and content on the earnings and the lifestyle those who aspire to be SEO writer may expect. The reality that SEO, as it is, has become a hot business niche that any competent writer can plunge into in spite of the poor data is here with us.


Earning online is the dream of anyone trying to create a different stream of income. That may be the basis for many people answering the question on why they became SEO writes in the first place.


Be it as it may, the deeply-rooted manner of SEO and its different twists is enough to point out that there are more reasons why one may decide to be a content writer dealing with SEO. We have tried to delve into the reasons why people choose to become SEO writers."












Editing Samples - After:


From Christian Fantasy novella:


   "I shook my head to clear these thoughts then heard my name called from down the hallway.  I looked up to see Marvin standing in the doorway to the main hall, waving for me to come in.  The agonizing sound of pain filled my ears as I walked closer to the room.  As I stepped in, I saw a warrior lying on the examining table with arrows sticking out of his torso, blood seeping out of his black clothes and onto the floor.


     Taking a deep breath, I tuned out the sound of the warrior's crying and the sight of blood as I placed my hands around the base of one of the arrows."




Clip From an Online Article:


"Top Reasons to Become an SEO Freelance Writer


The online space is abuzz with all manner of clips and content on the earnings and the lifestyle those who aspire to be SEO writers may expect. The reality is that SEO has become a hot business niche that any competent writer can enter in spite of the poor data results regarding success.


Earning online is the dream of anyone trying to create a different income stream. That may be the answer for many people when questioned on why they became SEO writers.


The deeply-rooted manner of SEO and it's different twists are enough to point out that there are more reasons why one may decide to be an SEO content writer.  We have tried to delve into the reasons why people choose to become SEO writers."